This book reads and manic and stilting as the first ... and that's spot-on for the character Mafi has created. In fact, if the book read any smoother, I wouldn't be as interested.Juliette is messed up. She's emotionally damaged, so the short chapters and scribbles really help to get that across visually (in case you don't pick up on it on your own). It's another layer of interest Mafi has added to a story that already has me completely captivated.
