Damned - Chuck Palahniuk Why can't I just like Chuck Palahniuk? This was okay, but even though the ending was supposed to leave me hanging, I just said "Eh, that's done" and moved on. I don't like his style, his stories or even his book covers.

Main thing I was annoyed by in this book: the way the main character had to address the reader when she used a "big" word. "Of course I know this word, I'm 13, not *insert stupid comment here*"
So. Many. Times.

You're not a 13-year-old girl, Chuck, don't try to pretend you are by writing crappy dialogue.